Love And Leases

I like this alot, the demo is great. The ros are writen quite well seeing how im stuck between the follower, rival and the writer. Not exactly sure who I will go with for the first play through. Also really wanting to throw hands with jade and the family. Not sure if you plan on adding something like that but definitely would fight jade given the choice.

Oooh I'm sooo giddy about Marcus's interaction with us! Love the story! Gonna follow this🤧

oih my gosh, that was so so amazingly good, so well-written, fun and bittersweet. I hope we can have a chance to get revenge on our sister and ex-fiance. I wish you the best for writing and have a great time with it <3 I'm looking forward to more <3

may I ask, who is apart of the poly route?

Well just played the Demo and enjoyed. I am also interested in how the story would develop. Currently Kim and Wilkens have my interest as ROs but that may change. Kim because of their past history with the MC and Wiklens because they are cute and I want to see where a relationship with them would end up.

Yeah, I have that, too with the switch of pronouns. If you choose a female dog it was one time referred as a "he". Chris is referred to as "they" several times.

I really love Cam and everything feels really fluid and over all satisfyingly balanced!

I have an issue though with the ex. I decided to make them an ex-friend and I don't get their reasoning. How can a simple friend feel such deep betrayal for the MC getting together with Chris? I get why we got no direct reasoning in the demo for the suspense alone but sadly with the choice for them to be no ex whom MC had a relationship with it kinda....irks. After the confrontation I was seriously thinking "wtf is their problem with MC and why ist it automatically narrated through MCs thought process that we feel guilt??" The last bit regarding the guilt felt forced upon the reader... No friend would turn to such extremes on a friendship simply cause they hate the partner? I believe there is a good explanation for it. Still. With what limited information WE currently got with the demo that whole affair feels...i dunno how to describe it. Before I was so throughouly invested in the story and then I was kinda kicked Out of this trance, If you get what I mean. It was a tad bit confusing.

Sorry that I needed so much words to deliver what I meant, hope it conveys what I meant to say.

And don't get me wrong, I was one of the first lurkers to your Tumblr account, I anticipated this demo for a long time and I truly love everything about it to pieces. The described situation above irritated me cause Im autistic af and have a hard time not knowing why someone hates me/ has a problem with sth I did - it deeply concerns me and that results to overthinking -and it kinda always bleeds through my reading experience in interactive fictions 😅 As one can guess I tried several times to reach a sliver of understanding...to no avail.

I love how strong Cams character was portrayed, If I had to choose what I enjoyed the most in your story it would be that. He just feels so complex and...well, real. Simply amazing work! 

I loved the route of Cam even before the demo, you delivered this expectation and more. Repect. Not many interactive fictions can do that and captivate their readers like that. 

This story is amazing! just wanted to add that there might be a bug with pronouns. When choosing Chris and the dogs pronouns the game kept referring to them as they.

A total blast. Want more Cam please and thank you

I thought for sure I’d want to go for the ex. I’m a sucker for that trope. But Cam!!! 

Amazing amazing amazing!!!!

Amazing x infinity!!!!!

I haven't finished the full demo yet but i just have to say holy shit i love this sooo much. Just absolutely fabulous, i need more

Was waiting for this one!  Loved the demo and am super excited for more!

Holy sh*t that betrayal wtf. They are so evil, is there any chance we can have revenge or get to see our jerk ex fiancee and his side piece get their karma? 😟

Just finished the demo, and it was a delight! Things flowed well, and though sentences did run on a bit at times, I was enjoying myself too much to notice more often than not XD

I'm including a list of minor typos I noticed as I went through, just to hopefully help out!

• It’s hard to believe you’re doing this. You’re going to be working for yourself. Picking your clients, culminating your image.

The phrase is 'cultivating your image', so I'm assuming this is a typo that got autocorrected or something similar.

• Before he can answer, someone pushes past you roughly, causing you to hit your side against a nearby seat. Markus quickly steps in front of you protectively. You’re unsure of the look that Markus gives the person but it was enough to stop them in their tracks. Maybe they thought Markus looked far to nice to be rude to.

This whole paragraph takes place before M tells you their name, so it was a bit early for that.

• I nod softly, not really wanting the book or to be here any longer. I take it without saying another word."

This is the first option when parting ways with M and they give you their book; there's a " when no dialogue has occurred.

• Cam nods, the bus hissing at its stop allowing you two to clamor on.

I'm assuming this is meant to be 'climb' or 'clamber', and not 'a group of noisy people shouting'.

YAY!! 

Congratulations on the release!!

I admit, it's one of the if's I was most excited to play. I can't wait to play! Kisses from Brazil.🇧🇷❤️

congratulations on the release!!! i've been waiting for this since i saw some random ask of yours in august last year! thank you so much and i can't wait to play! <3